The chart show the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK.

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bar chart illus
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illustrates
rmation about proportion of men and women in six type
of e
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types
ducational
school
in 2010 in British. It has from a nursery
school
to university. At
first
glance, male and female teachers are different in
percentage
in each type of
school
. Women predominated in younger student. Nursery and primary
school
, women were the most posts at over 95 and 90
percent
, respectively. For the older children and younger adults,
perce
ntage of f
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the percentage
emale teachers were nearly male teachers. College both sexes of teachers were equal, but secou
ndary
being of second rank or importance or value; not direct or immediate
secondary
school
women were higher (appor
ximately 10
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
percent
).
However
, in university, the
percentage
of female professors were less than male professors. For men, the pattern was the reverse. merel
y 2 or
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Merely
3
percentage
were male teachers. They were equal in college, but private training institute were
a li
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was
ttle higher around 10
percent
. Male professors predominant in university at 70
percent
. Overall, the figure shows that genders are signi
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patterns
the pattern
mployment within each educational sector.
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