The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
Given is a diagram illustrating the manufacturing of
leather
goods.
Prior to the actual production of leather
products, it is first necessary to desiccation
animal skin. There is Replace the word
desiccant
then
transported by lorry to the factory for processing. On arrival, it is staged on vat
Correct article usage
a vat
woth
water and lime, Correct your spelling
with
and
washed Correct word choice
apply
then
transferred to another vat where it is soaked by lime. Having been cleaned in this
way the material is gone through a large rollimg
machine Correct your spelling
rolling
fot
flattening.
in the Correct your spelling
for
foot
next
phase
it is immersed in a liquid called tannin which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter. Add a comma
,phase
This
is followed by polishing where a wheel is moved over the surface to produce a shine.
Finally
, the leather
is forwarded to a different factory where it is produced into the leather
goods we see in the shops, for instance
, shoes, handbags and sports.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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