The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
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Given is a diagram illustrating the manufacturing of
leather
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goods. Prior to the actual production of
leather
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products, it is first necessary to
desiccation
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animal skin. There is
then
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transported by lorry to the factory for processing. On arrival, it is staged on
vat
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a vat
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woth
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with
water and lime,
and
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apply
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washed
then
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transferred to another vat where it is soaked by lime. Having been cleaned in
this
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way the material is gone through a large
rollimg
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rolling
machine
fot
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for
foot
flattening. in the
next
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phase
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it is immersed in a liquid called tannin which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter.
This
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is followed by polishing where a wheel is moved over the surface to produce a shine.
Finally
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, the
leather
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is forwarded to a different factory where it is produced into the
leather
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goods we see in the shops,
for instance
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, shoes, handbags and sports.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words leather with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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