Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree? Share relevant personal experiences.

With women demonstrating their ability to perform just
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men on the global professional stage, it is no wonder that more and more men are taking on the responsibilities of domestic life. It is argued that all
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chores should be distributed evenly between
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couples. The virtues of
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arrangement will be shown by looking at the positive effects it has on both
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and the relationship quality the married couple experiences. For one,
parents
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who share housework provide a good example to their
children
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of the importance of empathy.
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while
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working in Dubai, I taught English to
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of several
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families. These
children
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were very proactive when it came to helping their
parents
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with
household
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duties
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. Looking back, I feel these
children
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acted in
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selfless manner in response to the living models their
parents
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provided. As
this
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example shows,
parents
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who equally shoulder the burden of
household
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duties
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pass on worthy character traits to their
children
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.
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to
this
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, the relationship quality
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couples experience can benefit from their sharing in the challenges of day-to-day life.
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,
although
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my own mother never worked, she was always very gracious
of
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my father when he would take the time to help her with
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around the house.
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sharing in hardship helped to strengthen my
parents
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’ union and acts as yet another benefit to the equal divvying of
household
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duties
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between married couples. After looking at how equal burden can benefit a married couple’s
children
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and relationship,
it is clear that
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this
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is an opinion that should be supported.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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