Men and women employed in full-time jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree? Share relevant personal experiences.

With women demonstrating their ability to perform just as well as men
on
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in
the global
professional
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Professional
stage, it is no wonder that more and more men are taking on the
responsibilities
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Responsibilities
of domestic life. It is argued that all
household
chores should be
distributed
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Distributed
evenly between dual income couples. The virtues of
this
arrangement
will
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Will
be shown by looking at the positive effects it has on both children and the
relationship
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Relationship
quality the married couple experiences. For one, parents who share housework provide a good example
to their children of
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to their children
the
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The
importance of empathy.
For instance
, while working in Dubai, I
taught English to
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taught English
children
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Children
of several dual income families. These children were very proactive when it
came
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Came
to helping their parents with
household
duties. Looking back, I feel these
children
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Children
acted in
this
selfless manner in response to the living models their parents
provided
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Provided
. As
this
example shows, parents who equally shoulder the burden of
household
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Household
duties pass on worthy character traits to their children.
In addition
to
this
, the relationship quality married couples experience can benefit
from
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From
their sharing in the challenges of day-to-day life.
For example
,
although
my
own
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Own
mother never worked, she was always very gracious of my father when he
would
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Would
take the time to help
her with duties
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with her duties
around the house.
This
sharing in
hardship
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Hardship
helped to strengthen my parents’ union and acts as yet
another benefit to
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another benefit
the
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The
equal divvying of
household
duties between married couples. After looking at how equal
burden
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burdens
can benefit a married couple’s
children
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child
and
relationship
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Relationship
, it is clear that
this
is an opinion that should be supported.

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