You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my
credit
card history.
Last day
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The last day
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
received my
bank
statement
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
checked it, there are some of the purchases which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am sure that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
did not
bought
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buy
. My name is Jandeep
kaur
a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
car
care
cure
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am
a
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an
international student. I arrived in Canada before 2 years. I was open my account
in
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at
with
Scotiabank. Most of the time, when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
want to buy something,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
always use my
credit
card.
Last
day, I received my
credit
card
statement
from a
bank
. I check all my
statement
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was surprised to see some of the items snows in a list,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
did not buy those. I did not buy tv, laptop and some other things which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
show in the
credit
statement
because
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
already have those ones before a long time already. I have a humble request to the
bank
manager to fix my problem as soon as possible. According to me, they will contact with the seller and check everything because
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am a student and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
do not have enough money to pay extra. I will be thankful to the
bank
manager. Yours faithful Jandeep kaur
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