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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data on how much
water
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 is used for agriculture, industry and domestic purposes in six states.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 developing countries tend to
use
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 more
water
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 for agriculture,
whereas
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 developed countries
use
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 more
water
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 for industry.
Further
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, domestic
water
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use
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 is the lowest of the three categories in all countries except
Brazil
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 and Nigeria. Looking at the agriculture data sets in more detail, it can be seen that the percentage of
water
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 which was used is the highest in Nigeria at 86%, followed closely by
Brazil
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 at 84%. Australia, Germany and the UK all show similar levels of
water
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use
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, at 38%, 32% and 28%, respectively. Turning to data sets for industry, it is evident that
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use
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the use
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 of
water
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 for
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 purpose is the highest in the UK, at 67%. The percentage of
water
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 which was used is the lowest in Nigeria, at 3%, which is the lowest value on the table. Industrial
water
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use
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 is the same in India and
Brazil
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, both at 9%.
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,
water
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use
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 for domestic purposes is the highest in
Brazil
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, at 17%, followed by Australia at 14%,
while
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 the lowest usage of
water
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 for
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 purpose is in the UK, at 5%.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, brazil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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