The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart provides information about how much
electricity
was generated and used by the top ten countries in 2014. Overall, it is clear that the
electricity
production
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produced
was always slightly higher than
electricity
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the electricity consumption
consumption
in all countries, except in Germany, and that China and the USA produced and consumed by far the largest amount of
electricity
.
(
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(
China and the USA were the biggest producer and consumer of
electricity
) Looking at the
first
data
the specified day of the month
date
, on
electricity
production
, in more detail, it can be seen that the amount of
electricity which
Accept comma addition
electricity, which
was produced in China stood at 5,398 billion kWh (
bkWh
), which is the highest value on the chart, followed by the USA at 4,099
bkWh
a port city on the Caspian Sea that is the capital of Azerbaijan and an important center for oil production
Baku
kWh
.
Production
of
electricity
in Russia, Japan and India was 1,057, 936.2 and 871
bkWh
a port city on the Caspian Sea that is the capital of Azerbaijan and an important center for oil production
Baku
, respectively. The amount of
electricity which
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electricity, which
was generated in Canada, France, Brazil and Germany all fell within
range
Suggestion
the range
a range
of 526.6
bkWh
a unit of energy equal to the work done by a power of 1000 watts operating for one hour
kWh
to 618.9
bkWh
a port city on the Caspian Sea that is the capital of Azerbaijan and an important center for oil production
Baku
kWh
.
Finally
,
electricity
production
in the Republic of Korea was the lowest, at 485.1
bkWh
a port city on the Caspian Sea that is the capital of Azerbaijan and an important center for oil production
Baku
kWh
. Turning to data set on
electricity
consumption
, it is evident that
electricity
of
production
in China and the USA was
also
the highest, at 5,322
bkWh
a unit of energy equal to the work done by a power of 1000 watts operating for one hour
kWh
and 3,866
bkWh
a unit of energy equal to the work done by a power of 1000 watts operating for one hour
kWh
respectively.
Electricity
consumption
in the remaining countries all fell within the range of 1,038
bkWh
a unit of energy equal to the work done by a power of 1000 watts operating for one hour
kWh
(Russia) to 449.5 (Republic of Korea). Notably, Germany was the only country where
consumption
was higher than
production
, at 526.6
bkWh
a unit of energy equal to the work done by a power of 1000 watts operating for one hour
kWh
Baku
and 582.5
bkWh
a unit of energy equal to the work done by a power of 1000 watts operating for one hour
kWh
respectively.

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