The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about how much
electricity
was generated and used by the top ten countries in 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
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electricity
production
was always slightly higher than
electricity
consumption
in all countries, except
in
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Germany, and that
China
and the
USA
produced and consumed by far the largest amount of
electricity
. (
China
and the
USA
were the biggest producer and
consumer
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of
electricity
) Looking at the first
data
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, on
electricity
production
, in more detail, it can be seen that the amount of
electricity
which was produced in
China
stood at 5,398 billion kWh (
bkWh
), which is the highest value on the chart, followed by the
USA
at 4,099
bkWh
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kWh
.
Production
of
electricity
in Russia, Japan and India was 1,057, 936.2 and 871
bkWh
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kWh
, respectively. The amount of
electricity
which was generated in Canada, France, Brazil and Germany all fell within
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of 526.6
bkWh
to 618.9
bkWh
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kWh
.
Finally
,
electricity
production
in the Republic of Korea was the lowest, at 485.1
bkWh
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kWh
. Turning to
data
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set on
electricity
consumption
, it is evident that
electricity
of
production
in
China
and the
USA
was
also
the highest, at 5,322
bkWh
and 3,866
bkWh
respectively.
Electricity
consumption
in the remaining countries all fell within the range of 1,038
bkWh
(Russia) to 449.5 (Republic of Korea). Notably, Germany was the only country where
consumption
was higher than
production
, at 526.6
bkWh
and 582.5
bkWh
respectively.
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