The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

line graph illustrates the information about men and women who want to study in Britain in three decades. The data are calibrated into proportion.

To begin

with, the majority of the males want part-time education in 1970

whereas

only 10 % of

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want full-time study.

Furthermore

,

part-time

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education parameter decreased by 100

however

, there was an inclination

in

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full-time learners.

This

parameter is approximately similar in order to increment from both sides.

On the other hand

, females are playing a pivotal role in

this

field. They are working

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760 but the full-time education pupils are only 10%. More so,

this

percentage

was

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increased rapidly not only in the part-time learners

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but

also

in the full-time learners.

Besides

this

, by 1990-1991 the majority of the tutors are in part-time because they can do their household chores

also

.

Overall

, both

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genders are continuously increasing their interest in both times.