Your landlord wants to increase the rent. write a letter to tell him why do you think the rent should not be increased? what will you do if it increased?

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Smith, I am writing regarding the intimation letter I received for the rental increase from
month. I live in your downtown apartment
six months. According to the tenancy policy form by the government does not allow the owner to increase
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in the middle of the year.
, the rental I am paying is above the standard market rate.
, I am paying for the amenities bill monthly which should be included
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monthly, according to the law.
, if you are determined for increment, I have no other option to vacate the facility. And
, I am obliged
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the law to complain about
step in the tenancy board.
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, you are convinced and being a law-abiding citizen will keep the rent the same. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Manish

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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