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letter to request a paid leave for three months as I am doing my Masters degree in public relations.
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time so I can focus on my project and exams at the college in order to graduate with an honours Linking Words
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, after three months when I am done with my degree I can do extra two hours daily as Linking Words
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what I missed already and I am sure I will be more productive and effective.
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degree will allow me to understand our customers better and finalize our documents rapidly in the local governmental offices.Linking Words
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specific marketing tools, so all of us will be working on the same track.
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Finally
, thanks for your time and effort and I will be waiting for your response shortly.
Yours sincerely,
Lama JaljouliLinking Words
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