You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear

Mr.

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Ali,

This

is Lama and I am working in the marketing department in Kuwait.I am writing

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letter to request a paid leave for three months as I am doing my Masters degree in public relations.

First

, I need

this

time so I can focus on my project and exams at the college in order to graduate with an honours

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degree degree

and do well in my final presentation.

Second

, after three months when I am done with my degree I can do extra two hours daily as

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compensation

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what I missed already and I am sure I will be more productive and effective.

Third

, I guess

this

degree will allow me to understand our customers better and finalize our documents rapidly in the local governmental offices.

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, I can train my colleagues how to use

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specific marketing tools, so all of us will be working on the same track.

Finally

, thanks for your time and effort and I will be waiting for your response shortly. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli

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