On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regards to
claim
my travel insurance, which I hold with your company. I have lost my digital
camera
on the trip to Thailand. Request you to process my
claim
. I have taken a travel insurance with your company, which covers
lost
a large number or amount
lots
of luggage and valuable item. While I was on a holiday in Phukat, Thailand I have lost my grey colour Sony super X digital
camera
during the city tour. The
camera
's battery was drained
hence
, I kept the
camera
on charging in a restaurant where we halted for lunch.
it
Suggestion
It
was kept under my seat near the charging dock, but somehow, someone managed to pick it. Thankfully, the tour guide helped me getting the security footage, but unfortunately the person face was not clearly visible. I have
also
lodged a police complain. Herewith, I have enclosed the
claim
form, police complain letter with security footage of the incident and the purchase receipt of the
camera
. I request you to kindly process my
claim
and if required you can contact me for
further
queries on the contact details mentioned on the
claim
form. Yours Faithfuly, Abhishek Agrawal

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