On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regards to

claim

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my travel insurance, which I hold with your company. I have lost my digital

camera

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on the trip to Thailand. Request you to process my

claim

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. I have taken a travel insurance with your company, which covers

lost

a large number or amount

lots

of luggage and valuable item. While I was on a holiday in Phukat, Thailand I have lost my grey colour Sony super X digital

camera

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during the city tour. The

camera

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's battery was drained

hence

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, I kept the

camera

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on charging in a restaurant where we halted for lunch.

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was kept under my seat near the charging dock, but somehow, someone managed to pick it. Thankfully, the tour guide helped me getting the security footage, but unfortunately the person face was not clearly visible. I have

also

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lodged a police complain. Herewith, I have enclosed the

claim

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form, police complain letter with security footage of the incident and the purchase receipt of the

camera

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. I request you to kindly process my

claim

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and if required you can contact me for

further

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queries on the contact details mentioned on the

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form. Yours Faithfuly, Abhishek Agrawal

abhishek.agrawal

Mar 7, 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

193 words

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