Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the street.Still there are robberies are happen that inside houses.What do you think Is the best things a person can do to ensure his or her security?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Few people are scared to move out as fright of being
stealed
take without the owner's consent
stolen
stalled
on
road
Suggestion
the road
.Nowadays,
house breaks
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house, breaks
are
also
occurring.In my opinion, learning of some skills for self defence is the best to ensure our safety. Currently robberies are happening everywhere.The robbers are selecting their targets based on some criteria.They are mainly
focusing
Suggestion
focused
on the houses in which is including a single person or vulnerable group.These people cannot stop them from harming others.So the best way to be safe is getting trained in martial arts.
For example
, karate.By learning
this
anyone who is being attacked can stop the attacker, and escape from him.These art forms make the people stronger and fearless to go out.
Moreover
, it develops the confidence, discipline, and focus
too even
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too, even
though it takes time to learn.It can help with the body and mind connection.
In addition
, the martial arts help in prevention
.
Accept space
.
We can use these skills against harassment, abuse, and assault as well.At the same time, it encourages personal insight
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
experiences with violence. We might fail
eventhough
Suggestion
even though
, we had other measures
to
Suggestion
of
protection.Availability of measures could be the problem.The other ways might harm ourselves too.Man made softwares will have their own drawbacks. To conclude, everyone should be trained in martial arts for self protection
eventhough
, they have alternatives for safety because, it is the best way to become more secure.

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