The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph depicts proportion of what kinds of people visit four different locations. Overall, it can be seen that cinema is the most popular destination among three different types of people.
However
, troupe is the least preferred place to visit over the same data. Looking at the graph in more detail, it is clear that migrants from English-speaking countries spend most of their spare time in the library and in movie
theatre
, 55% and 50%, respectively, followed by zoo at 35%.
However
,
theatre
consumes less of their free time, which is only 10%. Turning to the data of new migrants who were born in English-speaking countries spend most of their leisure time in the movie house, in the library and in zoo range of 65% to 40%, while
theatre
is the least favourite activity at 25%. It is clear that, the proportion of native Canadians who goes to the zoo is 42%, which is slightly more than double who goes to the
theatre
. Notably, the rate of drive-ins and library are %70 and %38, respectively.

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