More and more students are moving abroad for higher education. There are people who think there is an advantage to it but a few say that there are some drawbacks as well. What can be the merits and demerits of studying abroad?

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studying abroad is becoming an increasingly popular.For many people
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especially young students
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the chance to
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carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
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higher studies in overseas is an attractive
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there are some pros and cons to follow higher education in
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reasons
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To begin
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studying
abroad can give better learning
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opportunities
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where
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aquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
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the best quality of
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education, such
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as learning new skills and language
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expanding knowledge and
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make broader
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horizons
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advanced
teaching materials and methods
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which learning easier for students.
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mean that you have the chance to meet new people from different culture background and learn to cope with foreing customs and food.
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local student welcome foreing peers
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learning language from native speaker on real time
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which will be advantages later when seeking
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the state of being employed or having a job
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Turning other sides of the
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culture shock is a major problem for international students hardly to cope with the language barrier
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the food and
general culture difference
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general culture differences
a general culture difference
which may lead to homesickness and in some cases a sense of isolation.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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