learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. in your opinion,is it important for everyone to learn English ? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Did you know that about 30% of local languages do not exist now.
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Everyone, especially
young generation should try to keep alive their local languages.
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a crucial part
of our life in the following paragraphs. The
importance
of English and local
language
is discussed along with why English is important and how can we try to prevent
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the extinction
of local languages.
First
of all, English is an important and
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an international language
language
. There
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a plethora of reasons of its
importance
. English is used widely for business purposes and for studies. The
importance
of English can be seen in international business.
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example some
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example, some
countries like China does not and grace their students to study English.
Although
when students start their business they face problems in international deals so
furthermore
they have to learn English in late stages of their
career
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career
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language
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very good
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him so he has to work on his English skills to grab were good opportunities in his
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should be trying to ensure the existence of our local languages. In my opinion young generation can put extra efforts by organizing some events which
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create
awareness for
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the survival
of local languages among
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the people
.
For example
in my city we organize workshops to aware people about the existence of local languages.
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the
importance
of local languages can be taught in the schools because children
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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