The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides
the
information Correct article usage
apply
of
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on
present
, future and past populace of Correct article usage
the present
japan
.The table given
below Add the auxiliary verb
is given
also
illustrate the ratio of the senior citizens
of the
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apply
japan
in
the total Change preposition
to
citizens
.
In 1950 the japan
population
is 84.1 million and the percentage of aging
people is 4.9%. There Change the spelling
ageing
slightly
raise in the Change the word
slight
population
in
every 5 years till 2005. In 2005 the Change preposition
apply
japan
inhabitants are
drastically increased to 127.8 million compared to 1950. The ratio of senior Unnecessary verb
apply
citizens
is changed from 4% to 20%.
Later on, the society of the
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apply
japan
seems to be decreased gradually from the year 2010 till the
2055. But the percentage of Change the article
apply
aging
people are getting increased in the future Change the spelling
ageing
upto
41%.
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up to
To conclude
, the data given clearly states that the reduction in the population
of japan
in the future is because
the increased rate of senior Add the preposition
ofbecause
citizens
and lack
of Correct article usage
the lack
young
generation.The Correct article usage
the young
population
of the
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apply
japan
in 2055 will be nearly same
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the same
that
of 1950.But the percentage of older people Change preposition
as that
have
quickly grown from 4% to 41%.Correct subject-verb agreement
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, citizens, population with synonyms.
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