Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Most of the people, nowadays, love to watch the movies for their entertainment purpose. In that context, some people opt to watch non-native movies over their own country movies. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reason behind
this
cause and how can the
government
help them financially. To embark, There are several reasons for opting foreign movies. In which, the
first
thing is that these movies she seems to be more realistic. As foreigner made high budget movies, by which they made every single scene of the
movie
like, that
scene
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the scene
is happening in reality.
For example
, The Matrix
movie which
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movie, which
is a science fiction
movie which
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movie, which
in Reality, That kind of thing never happens, but they give them
such
a look that it appears more real to the audience.
On the other hand
, the
government
may prefer various ways by which they can support the filmmaker. The
government
may widen the scope of films by providing funds to those students who are pursuing their studies in
this
field. As it is seen that in many countries, not very much exposure has been given to it.
Next thing
Suggestion
The next thing
, the
government
can provide loans to the producers of a film, so, that they can make the
movie
of international level. In conclusion, I want to conclude that every
movie
teaches us something either if it is of another country or ours, but apart from
this
, we should not have to forget our native films.

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