nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers. what are the reasons behind it and how can we reverse this trend. What punishment methods should be used in your opinion.

this

contemporary world,

crime

among every age group has

increase

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increased

and became mammoth

issuse

prepare and issue for public distribution or sale

issues

issue

for all. Criminal activities in teenagers raise

drastically which

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drastically, which

will

having

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have

awful effect

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an awful effect

on future generations. I would like to put shine on the causes of

this

problem and suggest solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.

To begin

with, teenagers encouraged by

plethora

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the plethora

of reason.

First

and foremost, there is some leniency in laws for below 18 years of age.

Additionally

, the

punshiments

the act of punishing

punishments

punishment

given to teens and seniors are different.

For example

, recent

study

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studies

prove that

this

gap of leniency

encourage

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encourages

teeners

one who trains other persons or animals

trainers

tanners

timers

to do

crime

Moreover

, the

minset

a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations

mindset

of children is influenced by the

conpany

an institution created to conduct business

company

companies

of bad people and violation in movies which hit their mind toward criminal acts.

This

is why teenagers of today's world, spend more time on watching

enterainment

an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention

entertainment

with violence

ratger

on the contrary

rather

than

focuse

the concentration of attention or energy on something

focus

focused

on their studies and

carrer

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

careers

carriers

For instance

, the teens with wrong mindset result in illegal works. On the flip side, there are ample of solutions which can help in reducing these

activites

any specific behavior

activities

Firstly

goverment

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the government

government

should introduce new and strict rules and regulations with equality in

punshiment

the act of punishing

punishment

for all age

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general