nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers. what are the reasons behind it and how can we reverse this trend. What punishment methods should be used in your opinion.

In
this
contemporary world,
crime
among every age group has
increase
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increased
and became mammoth
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issues
issue
for all. Criminal activities in teenagers raise
drastically which
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drastically, which
will
having
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have
awful effect
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an awful effect
on future generations. I would like to put shine on the causes of
this
problem and suggest solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, teenagers encouraged by
plethora
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the plethora
of reason.
First
and foremost, there is some leniency in laws for below 18 years of age.
Additionally
, the
punshiments
the act of punishing
punishments
punishment
given to teens and seniors are different.
For example
, recent
study
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studies
prove that
this
gap of leniency
encourage
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encourages
teeners
one who trains other persons or animals
trainers
tanners
timers
to do
crime
.
Moreover
, the
minset
a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations
mindset
of children is influenced by the
conpany
an institution created to conduct business
company
companies
of bad people and violation in movies which hit their mind toward criminal acts.
This
is why teenagers of today's world, spend more time on watching
enterainment
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
with violence
ratger
on the contrary
rather
than
focuse
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
focused
on their studies and
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
careers
carriers
.
For instance
, the teens with wrong mindset result in illegal works. On the flip side, there are ample of solutions which can help in reducing these
activites
any specific behavior
activities
.
Firstly
,
goverment
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the government
government
should introduce new and strict rules and regulations with equality in
punshiment
the act of punishing
punishment
for all age
category
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categories
.
In addition
, monitoring that these laws are followed by all because there is no use of laws
,
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,
if they are not followed by people
proper
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properly
.
For example
, latest
reasearch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researched
study that properly and carefully following rules can decline the number of
crime
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crimes
.
Moreover
, parents
plays
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play
a critical role in children's life. They have to teach their kids about
outcomes
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the outcomes
of violence acts and inspire for doing good work by giving them moral values. All
this
helps in increasing damage among criminal and
also
helps in
diminshing
becoming smaller or less or appearing to do so
diminishing
the rate of
crime
especially in teenagers.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
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  • Finally
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  • In general

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