You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter -Explain your situation -Describe your problems -Tell him when you think you can move in.

Dear Mr. Shah, As you know, I have rented 41, George Avenue from you for six months starting from 1st of August.
However
, I am afraid I am no longer able to move in on that date as my plan has
changes
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changed
due to an urgent business trip. Well, at present, I am working in a company as a
projet
any piece of work that is undertaken or attempted
project
engineer. We gave an electric machine to Banglore based firm
last
month. And, from
last two days
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the last two days
they are facing problems with it. Today, in the morning I was informed to visit the company's factory and fix the problem. I am leaving for
banglore
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Banglore
bangle
today,
therefore
it is impossible for me
toshift
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to shift
to my new premise on 1st of August. I think moving should be
on
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on, the last week
on the last week
last
week of August as I will come back after
15th
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the 15th
of August after completing of my work. I will
then
occupy the
resedence
any address at which you dwell more than temporarily
residence
residences
at 41 George Avenue. I hope
this
will not cause you any issue. I am
soory
exclamation indicating an apology
sorry
for any inconvenience caused.
You
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Searching
rs Faithfully, Sachin

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