You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter -Explain your situation -Describe your problems -Tell him when you think you can move in.

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Dear

Mr.

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Shah, As you know, I have rented 41, George Avenue from you for six months starting from 1st of August.

However

, I am afraid I am no longer able to move in on that date as my plan has

changes

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due to an urgent business trip. Well, at present, I am working in a company as a

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projet

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engineer. We gave an electric machine to Banglore based firm

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month. And,

from

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they are facing problems with it. Today, in the morning I was informed to visit the company's factory and fix the problem. I am leaving for

banglore

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Bangalore

Banglore

today,

therefore

it is impossible for me

toshift

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to shift

to my new premise on 1st of August. I think moving should be on

last

week of August as I will come back after 15th of August after completing of my work. I will

then

occupy the

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residence

at 41 George Avenue. I hope

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will not cause you any

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. I am

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sorry

for any inconvenience caused. Yours Faithfully, Sachin

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7 paragraphs

173 words

6.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter -Explain your situation -Describe your problems -Tell him when you think you can move in.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Social media has replaced the traditional method of communicating and people use more and more of social media to communicate and follow news and events. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent. How you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future

Having a good university degree guarantees people good job. a To what extent do you agree?

As the number of cars increases ,more money has to be spend on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this . Others, however think that drivers should cover the costs . Discuss both views and give your opinion?