It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.

Nowadays, it is usually observed that there is no
good
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better
relationship between clans unlike the
time
past.
This
essay will discuss the main causes of families not being close which
include
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includes
lack of communication and pressure from daily activities.
This
essay will
also
suggests
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suggest
two possible solutions
such
as interacting well and managing work related problems. Family members hardly communicate with one another and engaged in diverse activities which causes stress. People over used themselves on
daily basis
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a daily basis
leading to stress of all kinds and do not have
time
for their family.
For example
, most family members assumed that being together during leisure periods is a waste of
time
rather than to take
arest
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a rest
. These have seriously caused family divisions creating adverse effects especially on the children. Paying more attention to the family and prioritising daily tasks are possible ways to relate effectively in a family circle. These will create
time
, familiarity and unity.
For instance
, get
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to
it

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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