Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking websites. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the modern era, where there is a huge advancement in the science and
technology which
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technology, which
plays a pivotal role in our society to make our life better in every manner and
internet
is one of them and called an "ocean of
knowledge
"but on the other it acts as mud especially for the kids.I will discuss both the perspectives and provide my opinion. As we all familiar with
this
fact that "Every coin has two sides" and
similarly
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similar
technology
also
plays a role of positive side as well as negative sides
.
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.
FIrstly
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Firstly
, I will focus light on its positive side as we all know that education today is not confined only to the books as
internet
is considered to be the powerful tool through which a child can get vast
knowledge
related to the topic.
like
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Like
, if a child wants to know about
sky
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the sky
,
then
in the book
knowledge
is very limited, but when he search
this
topic on
internet
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the internet
he gets vast
knowledge
on
this
topic.
Furthermore
, kids make them updated with the current issues around the world through
this
internet
. In the recent research, it has been observed that today's kids are more intelligent and their IQ level is
also
very high as compared to the past. But on the other side,
internet
also
has its disadvantages as it becomes a headache for the parents as children misuse
this
advancement at the larger extent
instead
of using
this
as a tool for their education they misuse it by playing online games
,
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,
surfing social networking sites and so on. Most of the time children spend on
this
technology
they actually considered as their friend not only
this
kids forget their cultural and moral values because they spent most of the time in isolation with their cell phone and are not connected with their families, they feel uncomfortable with them. Beside
,
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,
this
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
thus
they
also
suffered a lot with eye problems and neurological disorders so
this
is the need of an hour that parent should keep their vigil eye on kids behaviour. From the recent survey
,
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,
it has been observed that children indulged themselves in different crime like theft
,
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,
bunking their classes
,
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,
telling a lie and so on. TO conclude, children should use
this
technology
in a right manner and for
this
parent have to make sure regarding their usage.
Moreover
, by spending so much time on
internet kids
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the internet kids
also
suffered with the eye blindness and
also
suffered a lot of neurological diseases.
if
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If
a child uses
this
in an appropriate manner,
thenthen
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
then then
it is the most powerful tool.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

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