The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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who perform exercise on a daily basis in 2010.

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, it has been noted that the

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of Men' s

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has

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decreased,

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the women's

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a slight decline in

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physical activity. The

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from 15 to 24 and 65 and above

maintains

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the same

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of women

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47.7

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and 47.1

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respectively.

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the woman with 25 to 34

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of

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has 48.9%.

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the steady increment in the exercise

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can be noted as 52.5

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percentage

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with

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the

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between 35 to 44

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of

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. The female population of 45 to 54

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of

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and from 55 to 64

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of

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has almost the same

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of physical work with 53.3% and 53%.

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of 52.8% of

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rate

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was shown by the male

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whose

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was

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between 15 to 24.

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the

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had come down to the point with

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%

declination

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for 65

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above people. There is a fluctuation of

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between the

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with 42.2 %, 39.5% and 43.1% for the

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interval from 25 to 34,35 to 44

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and from 45 to 54

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of

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. There is a gradual increase of 2% for the

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of 55 to 64.