The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table summarizes how much a small
restaurant
has earned at
lunch
and dinner during the various days of the week between the 7th of October and the 13th. The majority of
sales
are represented by dinners, especially on Friday,
meanwhile
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lunch
provide
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less
profit
overall
. In both cases, weekends are less profitable than the rest of the week. Regarding
lunch
sales
, the table shows a steady increase of the earn during weekdays, except for Thursday which
present
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a decrease, followed by a decline
of
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in
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sales
during the weekend. The day when the
restaurant
makes the most
profit
is Wednesday, with 2,595
dollars
earned, meanwhile the least
profit
is made on Sunday, with 1,550
dollars
. Dinner,
overall
, gives more
sales
than
lunch time
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lunchtime
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, with a difference of more than 1000
dollars
earned than the latter. The
sales
are steady during the weekdays except for Friday, which is the most profitable day with 4,350
dollars
earned. After that, during the weekend, the
restaurant
experienced a
decreased
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of
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in
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incomes
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income
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, reaching its least
profit
on Sunday, when the
restaurant
made just 2,450
dollars
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words restaurant, lunch, sales, profit, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • peak sales
  • troughs
  • seasonal adjustments
  • promotional impact
  • customer footfall
  • external factors
  • forecasting
  • performance analysis
  • trend analysis
  • sales metrics
  • business district
  • revenue streams
  • consumer behavior
  • market trends
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