The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table summarizes how much a small
restaurant
has earned at lunch
and dinner during the various days of the week between the 7th of October and the 13th.
The majority of sales
are represented by dinners, especially on Friday, meanwhile
Add a comma
,meanwhile
lunch
provide
less Change the verb form
provides
profit
overall
. In both cases, weekends are less profitable than the rest of the week.
Regarding lunch
sales
, the table shows a steady increase of the earn during weekdays, except for Thursday which present
a decrease, followed by a decline Change the verb form
presents
of
Change preposition
in
sales
during the weekend. The day when the restaurant
makes the most profit
is Wednesday, with 2,595 dollars
earned, meanwhile the least profit
is made on Sunday, with 1,550 dollars
.
Dinner, overall
, gives more sales
than lunch time
, with a difference of more than 1000 Correct your spelling
lunchtime
dollars
earned than the latter. The sales
are steady during the weekdays except for Friday, which is the most profitable day with 4,350 dollars
earned. After that, during the weekend, the restaurant
experienced a decreased
Replace the word
decrease
of
Change preposition
in
incomes
, reaching its least Fix the agreement mistake
income
profit
on Sunday, when the restaurant
made just 2,450 dollars
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