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Many people believe that big businesses in addition to generating profits should be involved in and responsible for the social life of the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion

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There is a widespread view that not only should large corporations generate
profits but
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profits, but
also
 they are accountable for the Social coexistence. I completely agree with
this
 statement due to some reasons which will be discussed in the following essay.
In
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At
 the beginning, big firms are able to increase their interest
by
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in
 attracting more customers. If big businesses focus on both growing the benefits of themselves and their customers, after a couple of months, they can achieve their goals. The best example is prominent companies in producing cosmetics
such
 as Mac for women.
This
 company support
from
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of
women
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women's
 rights in different social areas via producing high-quality goods like hand crèmes and sell them with
lower price
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a lower price
lower prices
 to underprivileged women in Canada who have to work hard and unable to pay a huge sum of money for goods.
As a result
, Mac Company can double the clients and become famous throughout
this
 country.
Additionally
, big enterprises play an integral role in social life. It seems that growing the percentage of popularity whether in internal or international levels, helps to companies to hire more talented workforces who are interested to work
in
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with
such
 a firm, and gradually they become more and more loyal to the firm's value and help their society to become a safe place for current and
next
 generation. In recent years, Levi Strauss Company has committed to reducing the amount water used in
production
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the production
 of their jeans.
Thus
,
this
 company has been one of
most popular brands
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the most popular brands
 in producing jeans pants all over the world and helped to prevent water scarcity as the vital resources for human beings, animals and plants. In conclusion, I believe that firms should consider actively increasing the life of society, since not only it would be beneficial for them in the in
long-term
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the long-term
, but
also
 it is part of their indirect responsibility to society.
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