The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004

The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004
The graph illustrates the variety of meat
such
as chicken,
beef
, lamb and fish eaten by a particular person in a week
throughout
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1979 until 2004 in a European country.
Overall
, European people, mainly used chicken in their dishes,
however
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lamb and
beef
is
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are
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less likely to be consumed over the
23 year
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23-year
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period. People who ate fish relatively remained steady until 2004. The most consumed meat is chicken accounting
from
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150g per week in 1979 and markedly grew
until
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250g in 2004.
Whereas
fish
that is
constantly used in
the
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household food has a starting average of about 60g and insignificantly rose and fell that reached over 50g
at
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in
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2004.
However
,
beef
was widely utilized as the main dish in 1979 which has around 220g in a week and continuously declined that
gathered
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at
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105g after 23 years.
Furthermore
, lamb acquired 150g
last
1979 with the same trend as with the
beef
that is
considerably declining over 2004.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, that is".
Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, g with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • meat
  • increase
  • decrease
  • popularity
  • steady
  • stable
  • significant
  • period
  • type
  • contrast
  • decline
  • greatest
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