Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are those who believes that undergraduates should make the
choice
of what they want to
study
. While other stance is that
course
of
study
should be restricted to those perceived as relevant in the future
.
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.
especially
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Especially
those that have to do with science and technology.
This
essay discusses both views and I will portray my
opinion which
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opinion, which
is that people should be allowed to learn
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
they have passion for in the university. On one hand, people perform excellently when they have
passion
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a passion
for what they are studying. Making a personal
choice
on what interests an individual most makes them outstanding in their field of speciality. As it becomes pleasurable doing what they like, they do not struggle to give out their best. Rather, they unconsciously do the best they can easily.
This
in turns
,
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,
benefits the society at large.
For example
Recent
study
shows that about 60% of Nursing that work selflessly ensuring a perfect wellbeing of their patient are those who are passionate about their jobs and have made the
choice
of becoming a nurse themselves.
Where as
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Whereas
, those who were
cohersed
to practice treat patients in an unhealthy manner.
This
, relates to the saying that passion breeds excellence. In my opinion,
this
is the best practice as the person is accountable for
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
choice
they make without putting blames one other
factors
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factor
if things doesn't turn out as expected. Allowing peoples
study
the
course
that remains relevant as related to science and technology is optimal as
this
will help curb the problem of unemployment. Making students choose subjects that will stand the test of time is beneficial not only to the person but the nation. When a chosen
course
is sort after, the individual remains gainfully employed since they have an impact to make at every point in time.
Also
, it creates a healthy society as people who have
work
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worked
are not known for constituting nuisance in the environment.
For instance
, Research has shown that those who
study
subjects that are not of great benefit to their country are mainly the unemployed, as they are not able to apply the knowledge acquired in school
into
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in
any field outside their scope of
study
.
Hence
, it is apparent to do courses that
remains
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remain
relevant. Because, having a job and being
able to take of
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able to take
ones
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one's
self increases the quality of life. In conclusion, I support the view that encourages people to make the
choice
of their profession personally as
this
give an enabling ground to give out outstanding positive outcome easily.
Although
, having undergraduates do a
course
that is
appropriate especially
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appropriate, especially
those applicable to science and technology, ensures they have a means of earning.
Thus
, helping them live a better life and enhancing a healthy society. It is recommended that
university student
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a university student
are allowed
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is allowed
to make their
choice
of
study
as
this
reduces frustration when carrying out work that are perceived as enjoyable.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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