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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened . Decribe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

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Dear Mister or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the status of my suitcase, because it already happened five days and my luggage is not in my hands. Let me explain the situation again. I travelled by plane from Las Vegas to Philadelphia in May 21, which flight was delayed almost 4 hours. So, when I arrive to Pensylvania, I
relized
successfully completed or brought to an end
realized
 that my luggage is not available,
situation
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a situation
 that was so annoying. In the office in the airport, one employee of your company told me that my suitcase would be the
next
 day in my house and your airline would pay me 50 dollars for day of
dela
cause to be slowed down or delayed
delay
.
However
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However, this
this
 did not happen. Would you kindly come
back my
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back, my
 suitcase, and I want to ask
you how will be
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how you will be
pay
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paid
 the money that your company
promese
make a promise or commitment
promise
promised
my
objective form of "I"
me
. I
look
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will look
 forward to hearing from you in the near future. Your faithfully, Romina

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