The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart indicates the earning from the exportation of five different products and the table compares the value changes about each exports from 2015 to 2016. It is clear that four out of five exports saw an increase of value within a
year
. Overall, the total earnings of the
year
2016 is more than the
year
2015 and petroleum products received the highest proportion of the total revenue. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the gems and jewellery had a slight decline
by
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from
5.18% in one
year
, while other products had risen remarkably. The figures for the agricultural products show a merely growth by 0.81%, whereas the textiles increased significantly by 15.24% as three times higher as the petroleum products which accounted for 3% increments.
Also
, Engineered goods rose considerably by 8.5% in one-
year
period.
Finally
, it is
noticeable
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noticed
that the sales figures for four out of five exports have an upwards trend to that of the products of gems and jewellery.

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