Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. What extent do you agree or disagree?
A satisfying career among the
people
,
has been measured with various parameters, Taken into consideration. A long stay in an organization, Remove the comma
apply
give
us more Experience and Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
on the other hand
, frequent change in jobs gives excitement and Provide
scope for new ideas. Correct subject-verb agreement
Provides
This
discussion is
ongoing, Wrong verb form
has been
since
Change preposition
for
long
time and A group of Correct article usage
a long
people
supports long
duration in a company, Correct article usage
a long
while
others support Correct article usage
a short
short
Term. Multiple examples Capitalize word
Short
such
as supermarket
, Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
bookstore
and Fix the agreement mistake
bookstores
garage
have Fix the agreement mistake
garages
same
Activities. A brief introduction Correct article usage
the same
on
Change preposition
to
job
fulfillment in the following note, after globalization around the world, thousands of new companies arrived with new ideology
and most of them are successful. These organizations require manpower, who are innovative and Fix the agreement mistake
ideologies
technology oriented
. Add a hyphen
technology-oriented
On the other hand
, manufacturing industries
(for example
, automobile, petroleum and metal fabrication) are developed with new technologies, at the same point, they could not compete with the technology companies, such
as software, gaming and application based
. A revolutionary move Add a hyphen
application-based
on
Change preposition
in
the
mobile and internet speed Correct article usage
apply
also
brought us a new scope of requirement
. Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
Young
generation easily adapts to the new culture, Correct article usage
The young
such
as app based
taxi booking, food and groceries delivered at home. At the same point, Add a hyphen
app-based
middle aged
Add a hyphen
middle-aged
people
struggled to get
Verb problem
apply
adapted
and to mention, here work satisfaction varies Wrong verb form
adapt
on
different Change preposition
for
generation
. Mobile Fix the agreement mistake
generations
phone
Fix the agreement mistake
phones
,
Correct word choice
and, internet
internet
is one of Add an article
the internet
the
few examples Correct article usage
a
among
elderly Change preposition
of
people
to get adapt. A couple of decades ago, manufacturing industries
are
the major Wrong verb form
were
job
provider. People
joined
those Wrong verb form
who join
industries
have a typical repeated set of activities, initially
it was exciting and over a period, it might feel saturated. Major Add a comma
initially,
middle aged
population feel satisfied with their usual / regular activity, which they Correct word choice
middle-middle-aged
were
doing, Wrong verb form
have been
since
Change preposition
for
long
duration. Correct article usage
a long
Job
security also
need
to be taken into serious consideration, new Change the verb form
needs
industries
are innovative as well as
expose
to plummet. A young generation could not Wrong verb form
exposed
get
satisfied, since they are exposed to various technologies from their childhood, which is under the palm. A stagnant Verb problem
be
job
can give you satisfaction and security, but it will let you be innovative and brainstorm. To come to a conclusion, I can agree to a certain extent to stay in a job
for long
period, to get experience and technical knowledge, which can help you during failures and troubleshooting activities. An Innovation Correct article usage
a long
or
raises ideas in your own field and if it is found worthy and Correct word choice
apply
organization
accepts, Correct article usage
the organization
finally
getting reward
can tell you the meaning of delight, which could only be felt.Correct article usage
a reward
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion