write a letter to your manager to request setting up cafeteria for staffs. how you feel about it what you heard about inconvenience what suggestion you can give

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter on behalf of our staff about the inconvenience they are facing due to

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of a cafeteria in our company. As we all know our firm is well known among people and our progress is being analysed by other companies. In

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I feel very depressed because of the trouble handle by our workers.As they are working hard for the success of the company, we should allow them to have a break in between the work schedule

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Lack of cafeteria in our company premises is

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main drawback. So I kindly suggest

to have

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a cafeteria inside our

premise

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with tea, coffee and snacks.

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will make our workers relax between the

hard working

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time throughout the day. I mainly prefer to have a room which can afford 10- 12 people at a time and

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a good master for making tea and coffee.

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will surely help them to relax and in

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they can chit-chat with co-workers. Hope you will

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. I am looking forward to your reply. Thanking you, Yours faithfully Ashok Mehta.