There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperature higher. What might Be the man made causes of temperature Rising? How should we deal with this problem.

The problem of rising universal
heat
is becoming a major issue in these days. Let us discuss about
this
issue in detail in the following paragraphs.
First
of all, we are going to discuss about the difficulty. What is global temperature? Worldwide hotness is the temperature which is the universal
heat
produced by the earth in the summers. We have already seen that in the present summer days, there are more temperature that the past summer days.
This
is only because of the humans. We are continuously cutting the tress for ourselves. We are not planting the saplings as much as required.
This
is the major cause of the increasing disease. The other one origin is the pollution which is
also
generated by the human beings. The big factories and the number of vehicles are
also
used by us to produce trash.
For example
, if we are using a motor car for one person,
then
that person can
also
be travelled by motorcycle.
Secondly
, we are using air conditioners which are producing most of the
heat
. We can
also
live simply. So we individuals are responsible for the
heat
production.
Finally
, at the end, I would like to say that we must spend our lives simply and plant more saplings to reduce the effect the global warming.
Last
year on the birth anniversary of Guru Nanak Dev Ji a drive was initiated by the Prime Minister to plant 550 lakh saplings, that was the greatest idea by them for the environment protection.
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