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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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I’m writing to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager in your organization. I came across a job posting advertisement placed on my university’s notice board. I feel
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 I have all the qualities you are looking towards, in order to fill
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 position. I am currently pursuing
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 of Business Administration (MBA)
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 Loren Brusque University with Marketing and Finance subjects as my major. I’m graduating in the month of May
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 2020 and will be available to join your organization by
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. I have consistently topped my batch in academics with a CGPA of 3.6/4. I have interned under a quality manager
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 summer (April 2019 to July 2019) and have received positive feedback from my supervisor.  It would be great if you can peruse my profile attached to
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 letter and reach back for any queries. I can be reached
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 my mobile number for
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 Deliberation and discussions. Looking forward to
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 back from you soon. Thanks in advance. Best, Murali Krishnan

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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