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These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays, many people are very much confused about their job in life. That's why people work in multiple places, and
also
 frequently change their
career
 path.
This
 approach has both benefits and detriments. There are so many advantages of
this
 type of work.
Firstly
, many of us can't realize the interior environment of any particular workplace before joining there. It is difficult to assume that earlier as well.
Therefore
, after joining in
such
 a place which doesn't make me feel comfortable becomes intolerable for us. In that case, people find ways to ensure departure from
such
 jobs.
Then
 they have to look for other alternative ways to live their life which is not easy at all.
Hence
, they have to choose any type of job to manage their bread. If the repetition of previous experiences takes place, people have to shift again from
such
 place. But there is no doubt that it is better to choose a new
career
 path than being involved in an unsuitable
career
 path.
On the other hand
, it has some disadvantages too. Whenever people switch their jobs, that brings in a negative impression on their workplaces.
Consequently
, it becomes difficult for them to impress their bosses at all.
Moreover
, it is not easy to adjust to a completely new environment. People often find it hard to cope up with a new office & new colleagues. That hampers the prosper of them in life. That's why it is often detrimental in
such
 cases. To conclude, it can be said that there are both advantages and disadvantages of frequent change of jobs. But it is certain that switching the
career
 on a regular basis doesn't bring any positive outcome.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Skill diversification
  • Versatile
  • Professional network
  • Career advancement
  • Job satisfaction
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Market value
  • Job insecurity
  • Financial strain
  • Specialization
  • Adjustment periods
  • Unemployment
  • Deep expertise
  • Long-term benefits
  • Retirement plans
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