Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?

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Presently, producers
is selling
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are selling
there
of them or themselves
their
products with excess packing to pull the attention of buyers.
Whille
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While
Well
it is possible to claim that the responsibility of
consumer
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is to prevent from
overpacking
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products,
however
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, my aspect is that to refrain
overpacking
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products is an accountability of manufacturer. In
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essay
,
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I will elucidate my point of view by analysing both sides of
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argument. There are multifarious reasons behind my perspective. The most
perpodant
careful and sensible; marked by sound judgment
prudent
one is that not only the price of
proudcts
commodities offered for sale
products
is
increase
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increasing
due to
overpackage
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but
also
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it cause for the
degradtion
changing to a lower state (a less respected state)
degradation
of
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environment
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the environment
. As an illustration that manufacturer use plastic for warping the products which
indirectly hits
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indirectly hit
environment
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.Therefor it can be rightly claimed that producers should be prohibited for
overpakcing
reserve more places than there are places available
overbooking
of products.
On the contrary
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,
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,
there are a handful of people who
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that
consumer
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should take an accountability for stopping
such
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type of practise due to various reasons.
First
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of all stop buying
such
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type of product which cause
to
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of
environment
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and eventually
,
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,
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consumer
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consumers
the consumer
will have to bear
extra cost
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the extra cost
extra costs
..
For instance
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,
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,
supermaket
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
supermarkets
sells cut
vegetables which
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vegetables, which
is
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are
warp
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warped
with plastic and
also
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the cost for
that is
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high.
Hence
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it can be
aggred
united by being of the same opinion
agreed
that
consumer
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responsibility is to
pervent
keep from happening or arising; make impossible
prevent
from
such
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products. To recapitulate
,
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,
it can be inferred that manufacturers are more responsible to avoid over-packaging the goods as it would be wasting the consumers money and
also
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depravity the
environment
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.
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