In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Other believes the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion

In the modern world some people think it is compulsory to use a large amount of money for development of new railway lines for fast track from one city to 2nd city.
However
, but other people think the government would upgrade the older public transport and spend money. In my opinion, I think both are important because if we improve the railway lines
then
they consume less time and the public transportation upgrade there will be comfortable for the national people.
Firstly
, the government should government should improve the train tracks because it's very important for businessmen and some people who you want to go another city in a short time, there will be beneficial for them.
Moreover
, it is
also
beneficial for our economy because
then
more people use, fast train and less compared to the airlines.
Secondly
, it is important for safety.
For example
, if you have any emergency patient want to the Lahore for operation, it will be taken 3 hours, but what if we make fast track
then
and it took a half hour.
However
, if we improve local buses
then
and majority values will use public transport. Because it's very comfortable.
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will be improve their technology for our self.
For instance
, if our technology is better like electric car which is nowadays it’s the best method and I help them to improve the environment and clean the air. In conclusion, after getting all information I reac
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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