The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The line graph and table show the data
of
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for
water
consumption
in
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global
and in two different nations.
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globally
Overall
, it is clear that
all sectors in
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of
water
use
worldwide saw a gradual increase over the hundred year
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years
Also
, Braxil
receive the highest proportion of Correct your spelling
Brazil
water
consumption
per person in 2000.
From year
1900 to Change the article
the year
year
1950, the Change the article
the year
water
usage of agriculture increased steadily by approximately 1000 cubic kilometres
, while
industrial use
and domestic use
remained stable in the ten
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ten-year
year
period.
After the year
1950, we can see that the figure for agricultural water
usage had significant growth and reached its peak just
around 3000 cubic Change preposition
of just
kilometres
, whereas
the water
consumption
of the industry accounted for just over 1000 cubic kilometres
. However
, domestic use
only rose by 500 cubic kilometres
from 1900 to 2000.
In the year
2000, Brazil had highest
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the highest
water
consumption
of 359 cubic kilometres
, while
Congo only accounted for 8 cubic kilometres
. In addition
, Brazil had the largest population of 176 million and irrigated land at 26500 square kilometres
, while
Congo only represented hundred times as small as
population and irrigated land.Change preposition
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