Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The world
has been expecting
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is expecting
the increase in
economy which
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the economy, which
the economy which
is considered to be the solution to poverty as well as hunger by several individuals.
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, others assume that it is the cause of environment issues. To my point of view, I would argue that
this
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affects humans and nature both positively and negatively. Doubtlessly, governments in many countries have been applying numerous alternatives to provoke the economy’s
growth which
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growth, which
makes the residents not suffer from any difficulty in
life
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any more. To illustrate, Vietnam has tried its best for years to improve the relationship with other nations, actively join international conference and raise people’s living standard.
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way does contribute to the gradual rise in
Vietnamese economy
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the Vietnamese economy
as foreign countries invest more money on Vietnamese geniuses and places, providing modern machines and Vietnam itself
also
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develops industry and other potential fields. Citizens in Vietnam
therefore
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have
the high
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higher
-quality lives with useful equipment, study with effective techniques and have more opportunities to be promoted.
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, Vietnamese find it easy to buy food and enjoy
life
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everyday.
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wonderful it is, it seems to me that economic increase does have upsides, especially to the environment. People build more accommodation and skyscrapers to meet the growing population’s demand for houses, offices and amenities which lead to air and noise pollution.
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, global warming and animal extinction are
also
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due to modernization and urbanization. Humans accept to burn forests which are animals’ habitats to develop farming and cattle ranching, spare spaces for tourist destinations and entertainment places which are for tourism growth.
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, residents in Ho Chi Minh which is the most developed city in Vietnam face
the extreme
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the extremely
hot climate and storms in basis
life
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because they risk damaging nature too much, particularly replacing natural forests and botanic gardens for buildings to increase the value of economy. In brief, I am the opinion that economic development is harmful to
nature but
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nature, but
benign to
humans’
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human
life
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.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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