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In order to speak a foreign language well, you need to adapt to the culture of people who speak that language, and some of their traditions. To what extend do you agree with statement?

#language #culture #people #traditions
In the recent era, it is very important for a person to learn the other languages as well, so that he'll be well versed with the different languages. I partly agree with
this
 perception that for learning a
language
,
one
 should adopt the
culture
 and tradition of that particular region. Nowadays,it becomes an basic requirement of the folks to learn other languages as well and for that a person can easily learn the
language
 with the help of some proffessional in that
language
in addition
 to
this
one
 should
also
 take the help of internet through which learning a difeerent
language
 becomes very easy and
moreover
,it is
also
 essential to learn about the
culture
 as well because it helps in learning the
language
 very quickly
thus
for instance
, If someone wants to learn the french
language
 so for that a person should how they greet each other on different occassions so that he can
also
 uses the same .
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
It is not necessary to adapt their customs and traditions because
adaption
the act of accepting with approval; favorable reception
adoption
 is not mandatory and
moreover
,
Accept space
,
it is not all required for learning
,
Accept space
,
 so learning is totally based on
one
's will and interest and for that no need to change oneself to adapt them. It has been now observed the in schools
,,
Accept space
,
,
optional
language
 courses have been introduced
,
Accept space
,
for which tutors have been arranged for them and they don't require to learn by adapting their
culture
 and customs. TO conclude
,
Accept space
,
learning a new
language
 is good but
one
 can learn it on a routine basis
,
Accept space
,
and no need to adapt that region's
culture
.
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