some people believe that in the near future there will be no borders between two countries while other fell that national borders will always remain. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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The
two assumptions are being
debatable
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debated
for
country's border
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the country's border
in recent time.
some
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Some
people think that
beetwen
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
two countries
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the two countries
, there will not be any borders in the upcoming time; while others argue that
partitions
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the partitions
will always remain between nations. In my opinion, frontier should not be the reason for the
devision
an army unit large enough to sustain combat
division
decision
deviation
of countries because boundaries can create conflict which can affect
national economy
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the national economy
.
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One
the one hand, if
fontiers
a mark to indicate a direction or relation
pointers
frontiers
punters
will not remain, the security threats will increase.
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in
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In
other words, open border enables terrorism and crimes
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
immigrants will come undocumented.
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therefore
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Therefore
, there will be not sufficient information about a person, which can incite the violence

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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