Essay topics: In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures can be taken to prevent this?

The India is the most developed country and the most of the industries are constructed on the edges of the rivers and polluting both of the air and
water
. Let us discuss the actions which can be taken to prevent these issues.
First
of all, the major industries, which are polluting our environment regularly, they must be shifted somewhere else or can be asked them to use chimneys. After that, manufacturing units should be
also
controlled. They are sending their waste in the
water
and that
water
is being used by everyone. So, most of the people are using filters to clean that
water but
Accept comma addition
water, but
cannot filter at that level. Major factories should be regularly checked that they are polluting
water
or not.
Secondly
, farmers are
also
responsible for polluting the atmosphere.
Finally
, at the end, I would like to say that major factories should be discontinued in the state.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable construction
  • renewable energy
  • waste management
  • green zones
  • public awareness
  • contaminants
  • emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • air quality
  • water quality
  • eco-friendly
  • industrial pollutants
  • greenhouse gases
  • recycling
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