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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in a reference to
advertisement
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an advertisement
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 for a vacancy published in the student`s newspaper. I am 22 years old. I have been studied at the Technical College for 3 years. Currently, I finished
to teach
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teaching
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course
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the course
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 ‘Using Photoshop for presentation’ at the High School of Odessa and would like to find another job. I have over 2 years of experience working as a tutor in
area
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the area
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 of design in Photoshop and Corel Draw. In
additional
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 to that I have my own portfolio on
website
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the website
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 behance.com. Actually, if you want to check my professional level in design, you can see my projects there.
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Also
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 I have a reference from my previous job. I would really appreciate for
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to interview for a position of
a
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apply
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teacher for night classes.
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Also
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,Also
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 I would like to present my course
more
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in more
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 detail. I am available tomorrow afternoon. I
am look
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am looking
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 forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithuly, Yuliya Rudkovska

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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