You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in a reference to

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an advertisement

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for a vacancy published in the student`s newspaper. I am 22 years old. I have been studied at the Technical College for 3 years. Currently, I finished

to teach

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teaching

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course

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the course

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‘Using Photoshop for presentation’ at the High School of Odessa and would like to find another job. I have over 2 years of experience working as a tutor in

area

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of design in Photoshop and Corel Draw. In

additional

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to that I have my own portfolio on

website

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the website

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behance.com. Actually, if you want to check my professional level in design, you can see my projects there.

Also

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I have a reference from my previous job. I would really appreciate for

opportunity

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the opportunity

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to interview for a position of

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apply

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teacher for night classes.

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I would like to present my course

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in more

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detail. I am available tomorrow afternoon. I

am look

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forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithuly, Yuliya Rudkovska

Thu Mar 12 2020

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

160 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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