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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply
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vacation
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tutor
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 for night classes published in the newspaper 'Life in the college'. I am 25 years old. I have been studying at the Politechnical University for 3 years. Currently, I finished
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 a course ‘Using Photoshop for students’ and would like to teach it.
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 base skills for working with the programme 'Photoshop'.
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 the program students can create
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composition
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 they take knowledge about colours and harmony mix from them. I have over 2 years of experience working as a tutor in the area of
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design in Photoshop and Corel Draw. In
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 to that I have my own portfolio on
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 Behance. Actually, if you want to check my professional level in design, you can see my projects there.
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 I have a reference from my previous job. I would really appreciate
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the opportunity to interview for a position of
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teacher for night classes. I would like to present my course
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 detail with great pleasure in the meeting. I am available tomorrow afternoon. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithuly, Yuliya Rudkovska
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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