You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a vacancy of

tutor

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a tutor

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for class 'Design for students' published in the newspaper 'Life at the college' on November, 15th. I am 22 years old. I have been studying at

the

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Polytechnic University for 3 years. Currently, I finished

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course ‘

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Basement of

Photoshop

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for students’.

This

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course allows

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to get

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main

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knowledge for working with

program

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Photoshop

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'. The students can learn to create simple compositions and

theory

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of colours.

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Also

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they

are managed

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mix

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colours and harmony added

them

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in their projects. I have over 2 years of experience working as a tutor in the area of design in

Photoshop

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and Corel Draw. Actually, I have

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amazing experience in

Photoshop

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and be able to help students with it. In

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to that I have my own portfolio on

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Behance. Actually, if you want to check my professional level in design, you can see my projects there.

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I have a reference from my previous job. I would really appreciate

for

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the opportunity to interview for a position of

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teacher for night classes. In

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to that I would like to present my course

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detail. I am available tomorrow afternoon. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithuly, Yuliya Rudkovska

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

216 words

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