Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. Do you agree or disagree?

Today vehicles are very improvising than before and go beyond. In the past, almost vehicles
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used
tream en
gines
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engines, then
then
they improve to
use
oil
to be fu
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fuels, but
fuelled but
fuelled fuelled but
fuelling but
t destroys the environment so humanity has to solve
this
problem. On
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008 have some genius and become famous later name Elon Mu
sk who i
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Musk, who
s the founder of Tesla that release his
first
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brids
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hybrid
car
and become the model of the electric
car
system for many brands. What is a hy
brids
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hybrid
car
? The hy
brids
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hybrid
car
is a
car
that has a conventional engine, an electric motor, and a battery but still need some
oil
for combustion. Because they almost
use
electricity than
oil
so they just charge at charging stations,
therefore
the cost is saved than usual cars. For that reason, it can save an environment because it has less combustion so it has generated a li
ttle c
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less
arbon dioxide than
oil
type’s
car
. But hybrid cars still have disadvantages. Because they are too modern so it makes them too expensive, and the government can'
t
really support
this
system
such
as they didn'
t
have enough charging stations for demand. By the way, because they
use
battery so users have often to charge the battery it means they have a drive time less than normal cars. For those reasons, it makes many people didn'
t
use
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brids c
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hybrid
a
rs but i
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cars, but
t didn'
t
mean they can'
t
use
it because many companies have a campaign for public hybrid cars that can log in by the application and tell them where the nearest station. It's not all that much, the application can be GPS and
also
for payment too. So in my opinion, I think if I have a chance to decide between electric cars or the usual ca
rs,
an occurrence of something
case
I will choose the
first
one. Yes, they have many di
sadvantages but i
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disadvantages, but
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e nearest f
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the near
uture, many companies are trying to make electric cars enough needs for that reason the supply chain will solve every disadvantage and I think it
w
it is
it's
orth choosing.

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