Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV, video games and other entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect the children? How do you think this problem can be tackled

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, children partake in which

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educational, physical sporting, virtual sporting

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as gaming and many others that

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been observed to contribute some certain degree of changes to their behavioural pattern. In the opinion of some guardians, it is believed that the

level

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of

violence

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portrayed in some gaming,

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devices and entertainment has increased which has

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their

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. There are certain observable behavioural consequences peculiar to kids engaging

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violent

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viewed on

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and

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of media entertainment. Some of the few are

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desire for

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and

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activities

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, encouraging bullying among children who look a lot bigger and stronger among their peers and much more. Many schools and

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of worship have in various forms waged war against

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through preaching, music and educating many about the significance of staying off and the only thing they can be to keep doing more.

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, the government enacting laws against

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not an exception. In many governments, there are juvenile

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for capital offences or even a lot

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that could help restructure the mental unhealthiness

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child offenders are being built regularly. There are lots of sensitizations to dissuade wards and orient some early offenders about the consequences of the actions of these magnitudes by

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).

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one of the principal contributors to what a child makes out of life. Abusive

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are more likely to have abused children, so, the position of

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cannot be

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. It is imperative that

parents

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are constantly advising their wards and

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them through their own attitudes to stay off these red zones. I believe the

level

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of information on

violence

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should be controlled and censored to some degree. Music, videos and games publicizing

violence

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should have some

level

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of censorship where these things are checked before being pushed into the market for potential customers. I believe

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regulations have not been implemented yet or not functioning effectively, which I believe the government and the necessary agencies should look into in order to reduce the

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anxiety among these

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since technology is here to stay. In conclusion, modernization comes with a price and

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is one we have to pay. But I will

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advise that legislative laws against violent

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can really go a long way to improve the sanity of our progeny as long as we keep fighting to maintain

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proper mental health within

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society.