Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it
It is true that there has been a decrease in educational
standars
during the a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
last
few years especially
in academic subjects Accept comma addition
years, especially
such
as litreture
and math. There are various reasons for creative writing of recognized artistic value
literature
this
scheme and teachers and school
authorities should take steps to tackle this
problem.
The most important reason which causes such
a decline in educational standards is that schools
time table is already full with impractical subjects Suggestion
school
such
as art, music and soprt
. It is a fact that these subjects can be learned by students while they are not at an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
spirit
school
and children can opt them based on their talent, motivation and interests. Furthermore
, using software programs such
as calculator
or word processor diminish the pupil's quality in calculating and dictation. Suggestion
calculators
a calculator
Moreover
, schools suffer lack of useful teaching styles and methods and consequently
childeren
do not a young person of either sex
children
trained
well in some specific subjects. Take Suggestion
train
Germany
Accept comma addition
Germany, for
for example
, the government could boost the students' knowledge of literature by training the teachers in 20 secondary schools in 2015.
There are a few solutions for this
negative trend that can be beneficial and decrease the detrimental effects of scarcity of perfect educational system
. Suggestion
the perfect educational system
Firstly
, Governments should enhance the educational quality by employing well trained teachers who are motivated to educate pupils. Secondly
, compulsory training courses for teachers should be added to schools' curriculum. Finally
, schools' educational program should be revised regarding the academic subjects that are taught to children. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine
, indicates that the American governments could overcome Suggestion
the Times magazine
this
problem by improving the educational system in 2004 and as a result
the literature and accounting literacy increased up to 30% among the students.
In conclusion, although
children should learn descipline
, art and vocational trainings at a branch of knowledge
discipline
school
since they are practical in their future life, the importance of academic subjects should not be neglected. educational
authorities can address Suggestion
Educational
rhis
problem by regulating and denotes a person or thing
this
controling
the able to control or determine policy
controlling
school
curriculum.Submitted by yasiramer89 on
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