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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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There are
two
 plans give information about how
two
 rooms are furnished. The
first
one
 is for a pair of students, and the
second
 is only for
one
 single student. Usually the bigger the
room
, the higher the cost you have to pay.
However
, while the
two
 people who live in the bigger
room
 only need to pay for 175 dollars individually per week, the student who lives in the smaller
one
 has to pay for 200 dollars. The
room
 for
two
 people has
two
 beds and
two
 desks. They are separated into
two
 compartments by
two
 cupboards, each
area
 has
one
 bed and
one
 study desk. The
first
 compartment locates in the South-North corner of the
room
 with a window
next
 to the bed,
in contrast
, the
second
 is
at
Suggestion
on
 the opposite side. The
bathroom
 is near the
first
area
 and is separated by a bookshelf. At the opposite side of the
bathroom
 are a dining
area
 and a
kitchen
. The
kitchen
 contains a microwave, a sink, and a stove. There is
also
 a television on the wall near the
kitchen
 and the dining place so that the students can
also
 use the dining
area
 as a place to entertain. As regards to the
one
 student's
room
, there is
also
 a window
next
 to a bed which
locates
Suggestion
is located
 right
next
 to the right wall. To the left of the bed is a study desk. The
room
also
 has a
bathroom
 and a
kitchen
, but there are no dining areas, cupboards or bookshelves. Both rooms have attached bathrooms of the same size. Opposite to the
bathroom
 is the
kitchen
 with the same implements. The television is
next
 to the
kitchen
. Overall, while the
two
 rooms have different widths and different prices to pay, both of them have the same length of 6 metres, the same size attached
bathroom
 in the corner and a
kitchen
 with the same number of implements.
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