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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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In spite of having many new educational systems that benefit people, the majority of people are still accessed by using traditional written exams to portray one’s academic achievements. A great number of people believe that it cannot show
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the full potential
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an ability
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 to examine person’s analytical, mathematical and technical skills. As world progress and innovations are presented, it is important to have an expert, who could calculate and program a machine that could bring a change
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 a world. From my point of view, paper-based testing should still be kept in exact sciences,
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 as Math and Physics, but only as a part of whole examination.
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, pen-and-paper exams has downgraded most countries’ literacy level because most children are striving to score higher grade rather than focusing on gaining knowledge and developing themselves. In
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 never portray a person’s actual understanding of a subject, since the final score could be affected as by lack of knowledge, as by personal aspect,
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 as stress, in the similar way. I believe, that schools should
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 include team projects or research papers in order to improve child’s creative and critical thinking and provide a student with the topic of interest. To conclude, the vast majority of countries are still utilizing an old evaluation system, that could only benefit only a minimal areas of studies.
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, people should pay more attention to developing new methods.
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