There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a resident of apartments 'Cheremushki' on
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Malinovskogo street, 25, Odessa city. I would like to draw your attention to
situation
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with
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a garden
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which you want to sell for company 'Industrial Buildings'. I have lived in
this
district for 10 years. So I have always considered that the
park
is a beautiful and useful part of our area for many reasons.
Firstly
, it is a favourite place for walked for parents with children and older people.
Secondly
, a lot of adults use place and equipment for it for
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activities that
helps
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people to become healthy and stronger.
Finally
, the
park
had been
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of
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beauty and fresh air for many years. I ask you to think about selling the
park
one more time because it is
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for relaxing,
sport
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activities and simple walking for many citizens of our apartment.
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I would like to invite you
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running competitions on Sunday at 11.00 am in the
park
.
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way we want to show how important
this
lovely
park
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us. I hope the situation will be resolved soon. My contact number 39079897099-6 Your
faithully
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faithfully
, Jim
Braskin
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Brackin
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • affiliation
  • recreational space
  • habitat
  • environmental well-being
  • community gatherings
  • tranquility
  • negative impacts
  • petition
  • collaborating
  • voice their concerns
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