Many places in the world rely on tourism as a primary source of income.Unfortunately,tourism can also be a surce of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disavantages of tourism in the modern world.Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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In these days, tourism is a beneficial and emerging business.It is a major Source of income for a lot of areas worldwide

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although

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it could

also

initialize some issues in case of

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management that is careless or inefficient

mismanagement

miss management

. But according to me its merits

such

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employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

growth and

economy

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economic

boost are of more value than its demerits.Both will be discussed ahead.

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with advantages, due to tourism a lot of small and large

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relating to or applicable to or concerned with the administration of a city or town or district rather than a larger area

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businesses like

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hotels

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food shops

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relating to or applicable to or concerned with the administration of a city or town or district rather than a larger area

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transportation

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got settled.

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these businesses require workers in order to keep running.Resulting in more

emplyement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

for local individuals.Another benefit of tourism is its

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the entire amount of income before any deductions are made

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revenues

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that helps

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in the

growth of national economy

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which results in more facilities and services by the government for citizens.

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also

surges the

livings

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living

standards of citizens.According to a survey conduced that revenue from tourist places has a 50% contribution

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country's economy

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the country's economy

a country's economy

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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2 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Many places in the world rely on tourism as a primary source of income.Unfortunately,tourism can also be a surce of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disavantages of tourism in the modern world.Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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