The world of work is rapidly changing and the employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing

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letter with

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regards to describing a problem that already happened to me in your

store

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. I just bought a new jacket from your shopping centre. After coming back to home, when I put it to check if it is fit to me or not, I found that it was damaged badly. The damage is in the back of it and there is a small hole, which I didn'

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recogniset

show approval or appreciation of

recognise

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recognised it in the

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. As soon as I recognized the damage, I have just returned to the

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and I reported the problem to your customer service part For the sake of refund all of money. Surprisingly, I lost the bill on it and your cashier didn'

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accept it to return. So, I think that it is not rewarding to didn'

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accept it just only I don'

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have the bill. It would be appreciated if you consider my problems in order to talk with your merchandise to return it, because your company brand is the sign that I bought it from your

store

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. I look forward to hearing your kindly response.

Your

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s faithfully, Farsheed

f_shahbazi

Mar 14, 2020

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

190 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

automation
artificial intelligence
gig economy
freelance
contract work
globalization
interconnected economy
work-life balance
market instability
economic fluctuations

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The world of work is rapidly changing and the employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that the government should spend money on supporting cultural activities such as music, theater or art. Others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many rare species are being poached. What are the reasons behind this? What can be done about this problem

People should not use supplement. To what extent do you agree?

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