The world of work is rapidly changing and the employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing
this
letter with
this
regards to describing a problem that already happened to me in your
store
. I just bought a new jacket from your shopping centre. After coming back to home, when I put it to check if it is fit to me or not, I found that it was damaged badly. The damage is in the back of it and there is a small hole, which I didn'
t
recogniset
show approval or appreciation of
recognise
recognize
recognised it in the
store
. As soon as I recognized the damage, I have just returned to the
store
and I reported the problem to your customer service part For the sake of refund all of money. Surprisingly, I lost the bill on it and your cashier didn'
t
accept it to return. So, I think that it is not rewarding to didn'
t
accept it just only I don'
t
have the bill. It would be appreciated if you consider my problems in order to talk with your merchandise to return it, because your company brand is the sign that I bought it from your
store
. I look forward to hearing your kindly response.
Your
s faithfully, Farsheed
Submitted by f_shahbazi on

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